mc5 - Multiple Lines Per Player: A Limericks Special Edition

Here's an experiment with the Limerick form. In this game (and this one only) it is permissible for players to contribute more than one line each to each limerick, just to see if we can increase the level of coherence in this much-loved form as practised in the Morniverse. Everything else is the same as normal... Take it away!

Marc

There was...
...was hated
The waste...
...was fruit
Of what...

irach

There was a...
...truly was hated
The waste basket...
...rotten was fruit
Of what rancid...

Juxtapose

hope it's not presumptuous to try finishing
There was a boss whose worth equated
With how much he truly was hated
The waste basket chute
Was rotten was fruit
Of what rancid answers he baited

Kim

OK, acrostic time; remember, the subject matter must reflect the word in the acrostic:

S
W
I
F
T

irach

Speeding
While
In
Forever
Tachometers

Raak

Speeding down
While the rain
In the dark
Forever
Tachometers

Projoy

Speeding down country
While the rain spatters
In the dark I
Forever aglow
Tachometers telling

Projoy

(assuming a stress on "down" there, btw)

Juxtapose

I just looked at my last post... "Was rotten was fruit"?? Oi, somehow I read it as "Was rotten WITH fruit", which you must admit makes a lot more sense... now back to your regularly scheduled players with talent.

Phil

My first attempt at this manner of Limerick writing. Here goes.
Speeding down country lanes in my lorry
While the rain spatters o'er Tobermory
In the dark I'm gung ho -
Forever aglow -
Tachometers telling their story

Kim

[Phil] A splendid effort - first or not.
What's next?