mc5 - Multiple Lines Per Player: A Limericks Special Edition

Here's an experiment with the Limerick form. In this game (and this one only) it is permissible for players to contribute more than one line each to each limerick, just to see if we can increase the level of coherence in this much-loved form as practised in the Morniverse. Everything else is the same as normal... Take it away!

Knobbly

next tried with

Juxtapose

sticks,

to perform

cunning tricks

But

missed as he

asked what he'd won

Raak

A
Who
When
It
So

Marc

A young
Who was
When all
It went
So sad

Juxtapose

A young whippersnapper
Who was singing
When all others
It went "Take
So sad his

irach

A young whippersnapper named
Who was singing off-key
When all others lamented
It went "Take Your
So sad his pathetic

irach

A young whippersnapper named
Who was singing off-key
When all others lamented
It went "Take Your
So sad his pathetic

Chalky

That might have worked if everyone had stuck to the same syllable count when adding. This is my feeble attempt to pull it together:

A young whippersnapper named Jake
Who was singing off-key at Ted's wake
When all others lamented.
It went "Take your rent, Ted" [the off-key song]
So sad his pathetic mistake.