Yes, maybe it wasn't a classic, but I thought it worked ok:
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In fact, Dr. Q's line had good word painting...

[GIII] I see you've found your displacement activity!

I guess it comes down to whether you can hear these things or not. Even with the dots, I still find it quite difficult to get the rhythm right; clearly you, pen and the other participants found it less of a strain and so I'll shut up.

Still more in tune than Jemini, though.

T'was limericks that brought me to MC
But my poor scancion you see
Raised several alerts
And with my doom a good cert
I gave up. :)