variation time: May we invite alternative last lines? [no offence, S'ware] It seemed to have so much potential ... I'll start with I'm willing to negotiate So tell me please, what's your best rate? If we can agree By quarter to three My ego won't over-inflate.
Tuj] I may be wrong but I think the previous two lines were alternative endings - which is entirely my fault for over-complicating things ...however, it all fits so I'll follow .. Chalky - Before this mood's gone