Please don't take offence because you know I love you all dearly and all that boll*cks - but The Limerick Game - gah!
Proper names should have Capital Letters
The first line should begin with a Capital letter
There's too much inconsequential nattering which breaks the flow
Finally - do we have to go to the far end of a fart every time something remotely 'welsh' is mentioned?
:-) :-) :-)

< mode=sarcastic > and yes, there really is a Chat Game on this server - you're reading it now < /s>

Methinks I got out of bed the wrong side this morning.

[Chalky] Well, at least it only took you two minutes to notice...! :-)

[Incle Korks] I've had three cups of tea, so feel a bit better now. :-)

I agree, but I couldn't resist the limerick line.